Ch 10 Pg 14

24th Dec 2018, 9:57 PM in Chapter 10
Ch 10 Pg 14
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HollisChester 24th Dec 2018, 10:09 PM edit delete
HollisChester
That’s it folks. Let me know what you thought. An epilogue maybe? Mindie gets some? Kamila’s first threesome with Betty and her boyfriend? Let me know your preferences.

There are links to a few other things of mine here. In particular, Captain Terdy’s First Week is an illustrated story you might like - also at literotica.

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Dragonrider 25th Dec 2018, 2:21 AM edit delete reply
Dragonrider
A Smutastic tale, still would like the girls open a "Boutique Bordello" for horny businessmen. Work on call shifts Mon-Fri.
HollisChester 25th Dec 2018, 5:18 PM edit delete reply
HollisChester
Thanks. That will have to be a tale for a different day.
TomHCinMI 25th Dec 2018, 4:53 PM edit delete reply
I liked every page of every episode! Sorry I said nothing until now!
HollisChester 25th Dec 2018, 5:19 PM edit delete reply
HollisChester
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Regis 6th Jan 2019, 1:57 PM edit delete reply
Bloody amazing. The graphics are superb, and the story is erotic as can be. Thanks for this.
DAB 6th Jan 2019, 2:50 PM edit delete reply
Found this from your comment on Captain Terdy's First Week on Literotica, which is my all-time favorite story there. This was equally wonderful. You have a great talent!
kanka 29th Jan 2019, 2:35 PM edit delete reply
superb graphics Hollis! I didn't find it until everything was posted & have read it thru at least 5 times since. a slight disappointment that Liz settled for Clark.. really enjoyed the wordplay with Liz & Toby.. Sequel with Mindy/Minnie has the extra spice that Kamilla & Betty are in the know - how will you handle that? and that Mindy is out only two days a week.. this leads into Kamilla's choices (having maybe the best body of the three) how will she respond to the developing scene?

having a reveal might lead to two guys each for Mindy & Kamilla, all getting together at Jett & Penny's for corporate orgy & Betty/Liz getting a bit bored with sweet Clark & wanting to join in also as Liz. tension holding back reveal of Betty

just some plot maunderings. plot here was tight & Captain Terdy shows your narrate ability..

much success to your endeavors!
thank you for a gem!
HollisChester 30th Jan 2019, 6:23 PM edit delete reply
HollisChester
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I'll have to think about continuations. Working on something else first.
Lythar 5th May 2019, 12:08 PM edit delete reply
Well that was a hell of a ride, I'd love to see more of all of the girls!
cliveoboe 6th Dec 2019, 3:29 PM edit delete reply
Just discovered the link to your comic on your Literotica profile. This is totally amazing graphics work. It seems like it would take ages to draw all those frames. I hope you have done some more and this leads me to others like this. Well done, you!
troy8140 14th Jun 2020, 11:01 AM edit delete reply
troy8140
That ending..........I have not laughed so hard in so long..........Hilarious! Loved this one, glad to have found your sequel first. Both are great!
HollisChester 14th Jun 2020, 11:19 AM edit delete reply
HollisChester
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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